Sunday, July 30, 2006

Feeling So Lonely

When joy takes leave, friend misinterpret
Sunshine frowns and springs depart
Even picture which greets every morning
Suddenly start to haunt you
And you are let to your dismay
You allow it face with shattered heart
that rely on an artificial respiratory
It feels heavy and pain you never imagine
The tempest on the shore comes to rip you off
You feel lost, so lost as never before
When things are no more the same
Smile fade but memories linger
Life has to go on ....
Try once more and play the game
Wipe the tear and stop the cry
Sky is the limit if you try".

4 comments:

Anonymous said...

Dear Jiten

This piece of your feeling as a way of expression - it is wonderful. Very beautifully you expressed your feelings.

Dear brother try to see the silver lining in that black cloud and be cheerful, don't feel lonely. I just want to assure that you are not lonely.

When you feel lonely its good in the sense that it gives you time to reflect yourself. Reflect and review there you will get opportuntiy to make yourself even better. Take it as opportunity.
Your Sunshine will definately greet you in every morning.

Lots of love
Surya

Jiten said...

Dearest Surya di,
I have no words to tell how good I felt to have these warm words from you, especially on this blog 'Feeling so Lonely' when I am so shattered and devastated. You know, life sometime seems so strange and you get so scared of losing someone you love most in life. Like you said, moment like this is a time for me to reflect and review myself. Besides, I have not right to feel lonely when I have loving sister like you.

Thank you so much.

Love you,
Jiten.

Anonymous said...

Dear Jiten,
Your expression of your loneliness touches everyone's heart but remember, after every dark night, there is a fresh morning ahead, after every closed door, there is an open door too. We are always with you.
love
sangita

Jiten said...

Dear Sangita

Thank you so much for writing as you did and thank you for caring - it makes all the difference. It's such a good feeling to see your first comment here in my blog. Now you don't worry one day I shall resume my heartbeat to normal and continue doing many good deeds I dream dearly in life. You keep writing, keep cheering.

Lotta love,
Jiten.

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